10 thoughts on “3. ESSAY WRITING (Writing III)

  1. Namen:Selawati pasaribu
    Nim :1212150012

    I’m just an ordinary people who want to express a little about the figure of a Jokowi and why you should vote for him to become President of Indonesia. Jokowi is a sensational figure there are at least 5 reasons why you should choose and support Jokowi as the governor of Jakarta.

    The first and foremost is Jokowi free of corruption.

    The second reason why you should choose Jokowi is he close to his people. Jokowi is a leader who can be found by the people and He also often go into the field to meet the the citizens. When the curb street traders are being relocated, Jokowi go down directly into the field and meet the street traders .He discused with them, the traders also feel respected by the goverment, and willing to be relocated. I never heard Fauzi Bowo go to the field when controlling street pedestrian.

    Another evidence that Jokowi is closer to the people is he routine Controling his people especially poor people. Jokowi often give a little help glfood supplies and money especially For the oldies. You can ask Solo citizens, and they will say so

    The third reason is Jokowi pro with poor people. Remember the case of bibit vs. Jokowi, where Jokowi opposition to the construction of new malls because they will hurt the tinny traders.Moreover the poor solo citizens get the health card so that the poor people can be treated for free.

    I think these reasons is enough to make us all to choose Jokowi as the president of Indonesia, although actually there are many other reasons that can further assure you.

  2. I’m just an ordinary people who want to express a little about the figure of a Jokowi and why you should vote for him to become governor DKI.Jokowi is a sensational figure there are at least 5 reasons why you should choose and support Jokowi as the governor of Jakarta.

    The first and foremost is Jokowi free of corruption.

    The second reason why you should choose Jokowi is he close to rakyat. Jokowi is a leader who can be found by the people and He also often go into the field to meet the the citizens. When the curb street are being relocated, Jokowi go down directly into the field and meet the street traders.He discused with them, the traders also feel respected by the goverment, and willing to be relocated. I never heard Fauzi Bowo go to the field when controlling street pedestrian.

    Another evidence that Jokowi is closer to the people is he routine Controling his people especially poor people. Jokowi often give a little help glfood supplies and money especially For the oldies. You can ask Solo citizens, and they will say so

    The third reason is Jokowi pro kecil.Masih remember the case of bibit vs. Jokowi?! where Jokowi opposition to the construction of new malls because they will hurt the tinny traders.Moreover the poor solo citizens get the health card so that the poor people can be treated for free.

    I think these reasons is enough to make us all to choose Jokowi as the president of Indonesia, although actually there are many other reasons that can further assure you.

  3. TASK : WRITING III

    PROVEB

    STILL FAR AWAY BAKING PAN FROM THE FIRE

    In Indonesia, The date 2 of May is a national education day, A number of challenges and hopes sticking in the effort to achive Indonesia educational equaity, IS STILL FAR AWAY BAKING PAN FROM THE FIRE (still far from the truth). There are examples that the goverment has claimed that the distribution of nine-year compulsory education has been successful, Which quantity it has reached the illiterates who have been reduced but basicly the distribution of education is not only based on the people could go to school but also the even of education quality.

    From a brief issued achievement report millennium development goals(MDGs) Indonesia in 2009 which out by BAPPENAS (Badan Perencanaan Pembangunan Nasional/ National Development Planning Agency) mentioned that the goverment had achieve educational for all, The indicator is rate or Angka Partisipasi Murni(APM) elementary school/SD, MadrasahIbtidaiah/MI-7-12 years old and gross enrolment rates or Angka Partisipasi Kasar(APK) senior high school/SMP, Madrasah Sanawiyah/Mts close to 100%, Correctly Apm SD nearer 95% and APK SMP/Mts 96%. These data out in 2008. One of the quality standard that must be highlighted by means the facitlies of the library with a minimum standard is 2000 titles of books, Junior secondary school is 1000 titles books but infact it rare in many school.

    Ironicallly again, This time at least there are 292 primary nation school is still riddiing to the other school because they have no own building, It was very alarming because it was located in the territory of the capital’s country, Then what about the local areas far from the capital city or province? that would condition more concern. Three quarter money (setali tiga uang), There are no serious effort by the goverment to build the capacity of existing teacher, The goverment just build the headmaster capacity and supervisor, But the provision of teacher certification as a positive thing from the miniaster even though not enough to increase the capacity of teacher. Based on 45 Constitution that the education system must be repaired in just a national standard without discrimination, Be increased improving the quality of teacher education suppouse the teacher are not just chasing allowances, Every teacher must be in accordance with the right teacher education not just a dirty home.

    We need to improvement budget pattern accompanied by the use, Which refer to the fundamental improvement and curriculum improvement to the potential learner. The distribution of the educational quality should be viewd from geographic equity term must be controlled trough either regulation or legislation in the area of policy aitonomy on local goverment, Therefore they act to develop education in their respective territories. BOS fud(Fud school oprational) enough to help in the equalization financial but have to followed by the quality of education should be spread through the region.

    To Achieve educational goal which are expected to need, The equalization of all aspects are; qualified teacher, Good curriculum and adequated facilities other than the existence of controll system power from the central to the region. Construction of school buildings must give attention to the middle of town instead of just some office building so that population growth and learning needs to balanced not become ironic scene with so many school are still ridding on the other. But BOS announced the goverment could be considered a prover of some countriies try to follow as the model with the great expectations tha the education system in Indonesia was going in the model for other country.

  4. Nama: Ervina Sinaga
    Tugas: Writing 3
    The Inspirational Essay “Dreams”
    Dreams, as we’re using the term here, are defined as ambitions or aspirations. They are a part of everyone’s life. Some people have vivid and absolute pictures of what they want their lives to be. Others tend to see little of their future and just let life happen to them. Still others believe, sadly, that their dreams are impossible and meaningless.
    Dreams are, of course, a product of your mind. You alone can decide how badly you want a dream. But you have to know what you want before the universe can begin to help you see it as yours and produce it for you. That knowing is a decision on your part. No ambivalent feelings allowed here.
    When you know what your dream is, you can begin to form a picture. By seeing this picture often, with as much detail as possible, and by adding the emotions you believe you would feel working for and receiving your dream, you can make it happen.
    Of course, there is another necessary element, that of action. If you truly want this dream to appear for you, you will follow through with the appropriate action. That action proves to the universe that this is what you desire. If your actions are only half-hearted, your dream was only half-hearted.
    There is a last major ingredient to add to this picture. Gratitude! Picture the accomplishment of your dream as a gift and add the feeling of gratitude. Gratitude for something you haven’t even seen yet can make it much more real.
    Think on these things and realize that your positive thoughts are what bring wonderful things, material and otherwise, to your life. The life you probably want to create, one of beauty and fulfillment, depends on what your dreams hold.
    This is all not to say that you should live in the future. It is, rather, a suggestion that your dreams mean something. They are your mind’s way of telling you there is something good for you out there. To ignore them is to ignore an important part of yourself.
    Make your dreams work for you. This is your life, and nobody can make it something you don’t want, except you. You are in control. Theory
    The soul contains the event that shall befall
    it, for the event is only the actualization of
    its thoughts, and what we pray to ourselves
    for is always granted.

  5. Dear Nunuk,
    Your idea is nice, however some grammatical errors you committed makes the idea unclear. Here are some samples you can use to guide you editing the paragraph.

    The Importance of Technology in Society

    Technology is a very important thing to all of [for] us. We gain a lot of benefit from it. We already knew [know] that technology has been part of our daily living [life]. Wherever we go, we [will] see and we [or] use technology. Technology and society had [have] a synergistic relationship. This relationship has occurred since a long time ago. The bloom of this relationship is from started with the invention of simple tools which until it continuous development continuously develops to that the ones we using [use] today. The importance of technology lies in the benefit of technology on society. The positive effects of technology on society are vary. [Technology is continuously developed due to the benefits society gets through its use]. [Its] The advancements in technology have revolutioned [greatly revolutionized] human life, for examples [especially] in educational system and in communication system.

    Technological advancement has helped to introduce [caused] many positive changes in the education[al] sector. New methods of learning and teaching have made the process more simple and more interesting. Computer technology in schools and colleges has [been enabled] to helped teachers explain subjects properly. This has reflected [contributes to] in the overall performance of the students. The internet technology has been a revolution for the educational sector as it is an ocean of information. …

  6. Dear, Mr Parlin . This is my essay.

    The Important of Technology in Society

    Technology is a very important thing to all of us. We gain a lot of benefit from it. We already knew that technology has been part of our daily living. Wherever we go, we see and we use technology. Technology and society had synergistic relationship. This relationship occured long time ago. The bloom of this relationship is from the invention of simple tools until it continuous development that we using today.The importance of technology lies in the benefit of technology on society. The positive effects of technology on society are vary. The advancements in technology have revolutioned human life,for examples in education system and in communication system

    Technological advancement has helped to introduce many positive changes in the education sector. New methods of learning and teaching have made the process simple and more interesting . Computer technology in schools and colleges has helped explain subjects properly . This has reflected in the overall performance of the students. The internet technology has been a revolution for the educational sector as it is an ocean of information. Students can search for the concepts which they learn in the books on the internet and find out more information. This will increase the depth of their knowledge. Distance learning program have become possible only because of the internet. Students who can not attend colleges due to financial reason or due to travelling problem can sit at home and study using the online learning methods. Many examination these days are conducted online which has helped bring in more transparency in the scoring system and complete the tests quickly. It is no surprise that the benefit of technology in the schools or colleges have opened up a whole new learning environtment.

    Technology has revolutionized communication. Communication system have evolved from pigeons carrying messages across countries, right up to emails and instant messages that travel long distances in seconds.Cellular technology and satelite communication has taken the place of the conventional landlive connections..People can comunicate with each other and there are no limitations anymore.Computer networking has facilitated an easy exchange of information across the globe. The internet has turned out being an excellent communication platform.The development of mobile phone had a great influence in the society and the way people live their daily life.

    All of these benefit of technology are there for everyone to see.There is continuous advancement of these technologies . Advanced thing such as internet,mobile phone, machnines, etc.. Thanks to these advancements.

  7. The Place I never Forget
    Marriott Miami was the hotel where I was staying when moved there for entertainment our holidays in summer period. It was outstanding time when reached to this city. First Of all, I will tell you about Marriott Miami hotel, which was to fabulous attractions In Miami as offered best lowest rates rooms for me. It was located in Biscayne bay inside of eastern of Miami Bay. Closed to that hotel located Port of Miami where I went often during our Miami trip.
    Marriott Miami is best for business traveler also, I loved its amenities and services.
    Featured of that awesome hotel were outdoor splash pool and spa tub, as well as a tri level fitness center with bikes, treadmills, and free weights.Before to start journey to Miami, searched many hotels in Miami florida as well as cheap Miami hotels but we couldn’t pick any one of them lowest rates, as soon as my friend suggestions search Marriott hotels in Miami and got it at lowest rates. cheap hotels are located in everywhere just need some specific search to it. If you visit to any place then be make reservations your stay as well as take most information’s about place.
    Two things attracted to me in Miami, First were Beaches of Miami and second was it downtown and inside things to see. But, I love Beaches of Miami. I wanted to always that reserved hotels in front of beach Miami but we couldn’t. Whatever, few miles far got Marriott, it was wondering hotel and felt awesome there. I needed more entertainment so first day, I moved ahead of Miami Beach. It was summer time when I visited to there. Need more activities then changed our dressed over the beach, jumped to water and fulfilled our love as water of Beach Sea.
    Beaches soft sandy land best for sunbath, so took there. Watched wind surfing guys to there over the beaches hire chair. Walked also over the beach after swimming and sunbathing.But the sunset of the Miami beach so beautiful. It was wondering and attracted repeatedly to there. You can’t believe it that I went to Miami beach four days in our 6 days trip. Besides, in Miami other few place where I visited such as Ancient Spanish Monastery, a holocaust Memorial place where huge rush is gathering in every seasonable time.
    I visited to here and realized it was wonderful place.Nevertheless, the Jewish Museum of the Florida attracted also millions of tourist throughout the year and one of them I was also. Jewish Museums present oldest Florida culture and other few history to Florida state and Miami. I spent our time with well ways as soon as moved ahead to Venetian pool for swimming, where too many kids and adults guys were swimming in drain water of spring. I did also. Over the Bay front park of Miami was remarkable and attracted to all. I enjoyed it there.
    But as soon as watched to attractions of the Bay front Park moved to Miami zoo here over 1200 wild animals are living, so few of them I watched. The Zoo of Meteromiami, attracted to all ages traveler.Next day trail of the Jungle Island was superb and I needed like that trail to those time and I got it, however, we couldn’t stop my feet to port cruises relaxing tour, and over the cruise I took best dinning. Last day of the Miami trip, moved to Dolphin Stadium where I watched the fun of dolphins shows. for watching the show, huge crowd had gathered, it was fabulous show.
    However, last day of Miami we purchased too many items for my family, also ate meals to famous restaurants. The dishes of there were delicious, but the seafoods of there, couldn’t forget it. Packed our luggage in our reserved Marriott Miami hotel and came to home by airplane. It was nice trip but after this trip visited to many place for our business purpose and took awesome entertainment.

  8. The Place I never Forget
    Marriott Miami was the hotel where I was staying when moved there for entertainment our holidays in summer period. It was outstanding time when reached to this city. First Of all, I will tell you about Marriott Miami hotel, which was to fabulous attractions In Miami as offered best lowest rates rooms for me. It was located in Biscayne bay inside of eastern of Miami Bay. Closed to that hotel located Port of Miami where I went often during our Miami trip.
    Marriott Miami is best for business traveler also, I loved its amenities and services.
    Featured of that awesome hotel were outdoor splash pool and spa tub, as well as a tri level fitness center with bikes, treadmills, and free weights.Before to start journey to Miami, searched many hotels in Miami florida as well as cheap Miami hotels but we couldn’t pick any one of them lowest rates, as soon as my friend suggestions search Marriott hotels in Miami and got it at lowest rates. cheap hotels are located in everywhere just need some specific search to it. If you visit to any place then be make reservations your stay as well as take most information’s about place.
    Two things attracted to me in Miami, First were Beaches of Miami and second was it downtown and inside things to see. But, I love Beaches of Miami. I wanted to always that reserved hotels in front of beach Miami but we couldn’t. Whatever, few miles far got Marriott, it was wondering hotel and felt awesome there. I needed more entertainment so first day, I moved ahead of Miami Beach. It was summer time when I visited to there. Need more activities then changed our dressed over the beach, jumped to water and fulfilled our love as water of Beach Sea.
    Beaches soft sandy land best for sunbath, so took there. Watched wind surfing guys to there over the beaches hire chair. Walked also over the beach after swimming and sunbathing.But the sunset of the Miami beach so beautiful. It was wondering and attracted repeatedly to there. You can’t believe it that I went to Miami beach four days in our 6 days trip. Besides, in Miami other few place where I visited such as Ancient Spanish Monastery, a holocaust Memorial place where huge rush is gathering in every seasonable time.
    I visited to here and realized it was wonderful place.Nevertheless, the Jewish Museum of the Florida attracted also millions of tourist throughout the year and one of them I was also. Jewish Museums present oldest Florida culture and other few history to Florida state and Miami. I spent our time with well ways as soon as moved ahead to Venetian pool for swimming, where too many kids and adults guys were swimming in drain water of spring. I did also. Over the Bay front park of Miami was remarkable and attracted to all. I enjoyed it there.
    But as soon as watched to attractions of the Bay front Park moved to Miami zoo here over 1200 wild animals are living, so few of them I watched. The Zoo of Meteromiami, attracted to all ages traveler.Next day trail of the Jungle Island was superb and I needed like that trail to those time and I got it, however, we couldn’t stop my feet to port cruises relaxing tour, and over the cruise I took best dinning. Last day of the Miami trip, moved to Dolphin Stadium where I watched the fun of dolphins shows. for watching the show, huge crowd had gathered, it was fabulous show.
    However, last day of Miami we purchased too many items for my family, also ate meals to famous restaurants. The dishes of there were delicious, but the seafoods of there, couldn’t forget it. Packed our luggage in our reserved Marriott Miami hotel and came to home by airplane. It was nice trip but after this trip visited to many place for our business purpose and took awesome entertainment.

  9. My Best Pet
    This fall, my dog passed away. We had to put him down less than two weeks after discovering a weird lump under his skin. It was cancer, it was malignant and it was terminal. He was only 9 (sure, he wasn’t a young dog, but the average life length of his breed is 14), and he was my best friend in the whole world. I believe losing my mom would be the only thing worse than this. Of course, I care about the rest of my family, and a few of my friends, but I’d gladly sacrifice them if that would have saved my dog.
    My dog was my brother and my baby, he was the one whose comfort I would seek after a hard day. Petting him fullfilled my needs for physical contact – I don’t usually touch or hug other humans, and thus getting him made my life a whole lot easier – everybody needs to be touched and to touch others in order to stay sane, and he gave me that opportunity. More than two full months have passed, and I feel that I should be OK by now, but I’m not. The week between getting his diagnosis and the final visit to the vet, I cried all the time.
    The first week afterwards, I cried and cried. After that it got a little better, but I still cried when alone. I would lie in bed sobbing before falling asleep, exhausted. I was almost OK at christmas time, having numbed down a little. But during the last couple of weeks, it’s been getting worse again. There is a part of me unwilling to accept the fact that he’s gone, and that I’ll never see him again, and even writing this makes me weep.

    My parents don’t understand that I’m not over him. My friends don’t care. I know I should be grateful for the wonderful 9 years we got, I should be glad we made the right decision and put him down when we saw that he was in pain, and knew that nothing could be done to make him well. Maybe this is coming back to me this strongly because my parents decided to remove all the dog stuff the moment we got home from the vet, and have been moving the furniture around lately, so that there is nothing there reminding us of him, except the pictures on the wall?
    Nobody could tell there’s been a dog running around here. His favourite spots are gone. His pawprints have been erased from our home, and all that is left, is a couple of pictures showing a beautiful, healthy dog looking into the camera. Those photos aren’t making me sad. They tell me nothing about the past, except how he looked. The pictures on my computer however, shows him with us, his family, proves that he loved and was loved. A couple of hours ago, I went through some old film clips on my camcorder. My dog wasn’t the focus of any of the clips, but once he was barking in the background, and now my t-shirt is soaked in tears again.

  10. Characteristics Of A Good Friend

    Being a good friend is not just about having a good time with others, it’s also about how willing you are to put your friends first or point out when they’re doing something you don’t agree with. Have a read through the following checklist and see how good a friend you really are. Part of being a good friend is about being willing to listen rather than just talk. This takes time and effort but if you can make time just to listen to others and respect what they have to say, then it’s a sign of a good friend.
    You have to share a problem or seek help to your friend. You have to willing to make yourself available to friends at short notice and welcome them if they turn up at your door.
    You have to good at keeping it in confidence, and tell everyone at the first opportunity for something personal. People need to know that they can trust a friends with important information and you will only store up trouble for yourself if you are seen as unreliable. A good friend is both trustworthy and reliable. This is one of the biggest signs of a good friend and really does stand out.
    You have to avoid speaking badly about others or spreading rumours in order to hurt them. You have to defend friends when you hear others gossiping about them. You have to avoid gossiping others will notice how different you are and soon realise what a truly good friend you are. You have to put your friends needs above your own. You have to try to find a compromise if you can’t agree with a friend. You have to willing to do something your friend wants to do for a change rather than forcing them to do what you want. You have to willing to put your friends first in most things then this is a sign of a good friend.
    Good friends don’t just go with the flow, sometimes they have to be honest and tell someone what they really think. Sometimes your friends might want to do something that is morally wrong or illegal or just plain unfair on another person. You have to able to tell your friend honestly what you think about it, without just going along with it. The sign of a good friendship is when you can be totally honest with the other person, without them being offended because they know you have their best interests at heart.

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